So I am also creating a webcomic, but unfortunately I lack any of Shannon's artistic skill. Luckily opportunity presented itself in the form of about 600 fantastic and beautiful photographs of animals taken by a friend of mine while she was studying abroad in Botswana. Thus, Beast Babble was created.
This is a very rough first draft of my first comic. It certainly needs a lot of improvement but being as aesthetically hindered as I am, I would greatly appreciate some advice as to how to go about editing it!
Please don't hold back. Make me cry if you have to. tell me it's stupid. tell me it's ugly. tell me it looks like I vomited all over pictures of beautiful creatures. My grades on the line for this.
For some reason Pixton changed altered the format and I can't figure out how to have it publish correctly at this time so here's the link.
This is a really cool idea! I think it looks great so far. I would suggest maybe making it a little clearer about who's talking when. The dialogue gets a little jumbled in the middle. Other than that, great job!
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